
Took me forever to draw up these sections of the site using google earth, illustrator, and CAD. Amazing how it takes so much to make something simple.
2nd Witch:
By the pricking of my thumbs,
Something scape-ish this way comes. [Knocking]
Open locks,
Whoever knocks!
[Enter Macbeth]
Macbeth:
How now, you secret, black, and midnight hags!
What is't you do?






1 a : metrical writing : verse b : the productions of a poet : poems
2 : writing that formulates a concentrated imaginative awareness of experience in language chosen and arranged to create a specific emotional response through meaning, sound, and rhythm
In terms of my thesis and landscape, the parts of this definition that are most crucial are these:
1) Formulation (I will substitute the word "reconfiguration", as I believe the essential poetic act to be one of invention through the re-combination and re-juxtaposition of known perceived elements, and NOT the spontaneous invention of a single, image, idea, or master plan.) Can making architecture or painting essentially involve the same process as making poetry. Yes. Are all pantings and works of architecture poetic? No. Whether something is poetic or not is quite subjective, but I would argue that there is a level of success that can be ranked according to the following criteria: 2) Unlike some would argue, the level of success is not based on an esoteric, ephemeral, and indescribable "je ne sais quoi." Although we might not be able to say why a poem moves us, I believe that a work becomes poetic when it reconfigures our usual perceptions by enabling new ways to imagine. The "poetic" lies in an artist's ability to reconfigure something in a way that brings about what Webster's described as that second crucial part of the definition: "concentrated imaginative awareness."
3) "through meaning, sound, and rhythm" - This part of the definition is much more vague, and I would say it is more useful to look at the creation of poetry in terms of meaning, rhythm and sensory input. Each kind of poetry uses a different sensory channel (for instance music uses sound and painting uses light, and some forms of art use multiple channels). Rhythm does seem to be an adequate word for grouping the structural elements behind poetry (e.g. alliteration, repetition, cadence, lack of rhythm, etc.) The elements of a poem (be it words, paint colors, wood and brick, etc) are imbued with a set of characteristics and histories, and as such they mean something to each artist or viewer.
So my definition of poetry becomes:
A process of reconfiguration that inspires imaginative awareness of experience, creating an emotional response through meaning, sensory input, and rhythm.
At the moment I am most interested in creating architecture with WRITTEN poetry as the basis for the design. I am still figuring out how this is done, but Ann Pendleton's "The road that is not a road" is helping me establish the validity of this act. What I can say is that the written and spoken word seem to be the most complex, societally crucial, and uniquely human form of sensory communication that we use. It seems appropriate to utilize the power of the word, as it is perhaps the most versatile basic poetic element. A brick or a dab of red paint or a touch do certainly have meaning, but if the combination of these elements could come close to having the same communicative potential and variety of meaning as the word, then humans around the globe wouldn't all be talking to each other.











SITE- Reasons for choosing
A - -Area of constant and considerable human traffic
- L -lengthwise directionality offers potential for narrative space.
C-- - Poised at a series of confluences and contradictions (hill and river valley, East Side and the rest of Providence, College vs. City, water and land)
D- - Proximity to water fire.
E - -Proximity to courthouse, which also represents the confluence of city/justice system vs. citizens/public.
F- - -Intangibility, ambiguity between content and context, and disorganization of existing design provides an ideal context for public interaction with the land and the creation of a meaningful place.
G- - RISD! The school, being urban and contained within city buildings, lacks areas where the RISD community can interact with the city at large. A park that functioned as more than a through-way for students and full time residents alike might constitute a perfect place for dialogue and meshing of ideas. The park is surrounded by both RISD buildings and also buildings crucial to the government of Providence (not to mention several historically significant structures, i.e. the old bank building). The providence river delineates a stark boundary between the eastside and downtown, the local and the foreign, students and city dwellers, the well to do and the downtrodden, the world of academia and the rest of Rhode Island. The park I’m choosing forms a large part of the view of the eastside and thus has amazing potential to either bridge the gap between two shores, make it wider, or at least make a comment on the current state of affairs. In a more aesthetic vein, the view of the eastside from downtown is distinctly lovely and full of personality. Can a new, better designed, and more engaging park add to the basic aesthetic potential of this area?
GOALS: To create a dialogue between the designer, the public, and the natural forces within my site. To build in a way that encourages the public to interact with the site in a direct and communal manner, thus establishing meaningful place. To challenge landscape as land-escape, and convert a site which is essentially a bridge into a place of interaction and creation.
THE CREATION OF A POETIC DIALOG
Appropriation, Improvisation, Reinvention
- Site analysis through poetry, form building, drawing
- sampling and pastiche (as related to culture, formal elements, environmental elements). The current design of the park can be seen as an exercise in sampling gone terribly wrong.
- Envisioning new story lines
By changing its stories, or frameworks, a society imagines its futures. In face of urban violence it is possible to imagine a city of conviviality, in which the built environment is determined bypatterns of sociation which accommodate difference, rather than one in which the environmentdetermines the sociation it contains. In the latter case, of course, it is the structures of powerand value through which the built environment takes its particular form which are the determining factors, mediated by decisions of planning and so forth. Imagining a convivial, or sustainable, city entails a reformulation of the aesthetic, or beauty, as something integrated in and expressing the possible fulfilment of everyday life, not something outside it acting like an opiate. – Malcolm Miles, from “Strategies for the convivial city.”
- Creation of spatial relationships based on rhythm, cadence, narrative flow (build up, climax, etc.)
2- Improvisation (Allowing the public and the natural world to do their thing and appropriate the site in their own way)
3- reinvention (resulting from the work of the designer, the results of improvisation, and the resulting dialog)